[spoiler]Ok may dude love your style but Periods (like this -> . ). Exist. Please use them, it hurts me physically to read stuff without them. Also, characters speaking, use Quotation marks, and say what they say exactly. I also like to use italics for talking, looks good. Anyways, onto the story!"[/spoiler] [b]The lobby was furnished with some couches and various artifacts on the walls, mostly drawings and diagrams in picture frames. When you walk in, there's nobody there, but with a flash of smoke and light, suddenly a man stands before you. He stands at about 5' 10, and is wearing a long white jacket, almost a robe, and carries a cane made of vertebrae and a raven skull. He is a bit portly, but certainly not fat. He bows deeply and extravagantly, before straightening.[/b] [i]"Welcome, dear guest, to the Necrotel, home of all Necromatic knowledge. How may I assist you today?"[/i]