[spoiler]Sorry, I'll put it...moar.[/spoiler]
[b]Trying to desperately ignore the grotesque shapes, Ornstein trudges throughout the strange, demonic area. He looks at one of the tombstones, a crooked one made out of some type of black stone, then shakes his head. He sighs and turns away from the stone, trying to get the man's face out of his head...
At least, until he heard something else in the room.
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[spoiler]its all good lol, I just want a better picture of your character and your writing style. I like where this is going.[/spoiler] You see a plume of sand shoots up into the air roughly a hundred meters in front of you. You realize that something is underneath all this sand. Another plume erupts behind you and to the side - you've disturbed something(s). The movement beneath your feet displaces sand, and lowers the great height of it piled around the door frame. You're now able to hear howling wind, almost sounding as if that area is outside... This definitely doesn't belong in a starship. The door frame is clearing rapidly, perhaps you could run to it before whatever is buried beneath this sand eats you alive.