I'm no expert on these things. But I think you come over well, you've got a good voice - doing these kinds of vids is abit like being a radio DJ/presenter. It's all about the voice and being natural, and the ability to talk and ad-lib in an entertaining fashion - the gift of the gab, if you like -being a salesman, selling yourself. So yes, I think you're doing fine, started well, and you're sure to get even better with time and experience Where did that no more zelda vid come from? It was quite funny