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	It's not bad... My issue is who is meant to be the protagonist?
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	You really don't get into his head until the first chapter
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	Edited by NukeHawk116: 1/10/2016 7:16:28 PMThen it is average/above-average so far...
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	Do you have OCs that you could let me use???
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	Resnov "Cobalt" Kinlev III Russian Specializes in heavy weapons Lugs minigun, rocket launcher, deagle. Lieutenant first class [spoiler]anything else you want me to add?[/spoiler]
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	Kinda blew up, but was teleported via teleportation bomb
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	Quiet Tabetic... *puts index finger in front of your nose*
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	Edited by TabeticTerror1: 1/10/2016 7:54:15 PM*slaps finger and gives thrall hand*
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	I don't need a new hand...
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	*reaches into bottomless bag and pulls out a cookie and gives it to nuke*
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	*snatches cookie and woofs it down*
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	*pours cookies into a bucket*
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	It was a bit stale...
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	*pours more cookies*
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	*Shoves bucket back* (this is real life) I've had almost a pound of chocolate and a large bar of Tolberone... I don't want anymore junk food right now...
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	Edited by TabeticTerror1: 1/10/2016 8:48:12 PM•________________________• its a whale!
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	Thanks. I think I'll start Ch. 1 . Can you help me with rallying a few OC's? I have my own but I want to use some other's OCs
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	Private Alex Wolf Logger. It's just the prelogue