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my celebrity hot take

taylor swift is a terrible person. shes been with a ton of guys, has an album for every single one where she spends the entire thing blaming men for all her problems and refuses to take accountability and never fixes her issues. so many women love her because she reflects their own problems and refusal to take accountability. i 100% guarantee u theyre gonna divorce and shell make at least 3 albums off of it
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  • Edited by Dave.: 9/7/2025 9:08:43 PM
    Do not fear, for Dave. is here! Officer Dave. of the grammar police department has been dispatched for this absolutely gruesome crime scene of a paragraph. *Taylor Swift (You forgot the capitalization.) *She’s (You forgot capitalization and apostrophe.) *many (Ton is a unit of measurement, which can still be unitized in this current context, but should be substituted.) *ex-lover (One is too obscure of a word to use in this context.) *album (Thing is much too vague of a word, this could cause confusion.) *and she refuses (You should specify the person refusing, to clear up chances for confusion.) *and she never (Once again, you should specify the person doing the action.) *So many (Again, forgot capitalization.) *I (Once Again, no capitalization used.) *you they’re (“U” is not grammatically correct, and you forgot the apostrophe.” *going to (“Gonna” is acceptable, but not grammatically accurate.) *she’ll (Once again, forgot the apostrophe, and “shell” does not make sense in the current scenario.) *off of their divorce or breakup. (You forgot your punctuation, and “it” is much too vague to use, and you should specify the cause for the “at least 3 albums.”)

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