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2 RepliesI liked it. Sounded like the MC knew what to expect with the visions from being chosen, was he chosen before? Or does the government give people a vague description of what to expect? Maybe I was just thinking too hard, good story. Write more.
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2 RepliesNot bad, although you should call the lottery thing something else.
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3 RepliesThe story is too lengthy isnt it...
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2 RepliesGoodddzzzz